Holly Berries

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Bardmaster
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Holly Berries

Post by Bardmaster » January 4th, 2009, 2:25 pm

Holly Berries

red fruit against the green
buttons to delight the Robins
sway in the wind this day
tap out a drum roll call
but no birds are near
they hide within the wind
wait for the call
to drink of this poison
only weeks away
from a total drunkenness
silly birds so immune
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Post by Lightning Rod » January 4th, 2009, 2:31 pm

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"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Bardmaster » January 4th, 2009, 2:44 pm

one of my favorites! I'm already drunk
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Post by constantine » January 5th, 2009, 8:48 pm

tight poem, bard. light and pensive at the same time.
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Post by Bardmaster » January 5th, 2009, 8:53 pm

thanks, i'm waiting for the arrival of the robins. soon
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