Give Me

Post by **K&D** » January 3rd, 2009, 3:26 am

Show me something, anything
I’ll be the mouse play with your prey.
Take me for a spin
Maybe it’ll give you a grin.

Convince me your worth knowing.
I might just let you
tickle me pink.

You think you can keep my attention?
What makes you so interesting?

Post by **constantine** » January 3rd, 2009, 11:13 am

cool.

Post by **Doreen Peri** » January 3rd, 2009, 2:50 pm

sounds like fun!

i like this...

"I might just let you
tickle me pink."

Post by **K&D** » January 3rd, 2009, 3:27 pm

yeah dor, i love that line too.

I'm normally a pretty self depricating person but i wrote that line and smiled gave myself a little mental pat on the back.

i think with sometime this could be awesome, right now its just something that litterally i just sat down and wrote, which is unusual, i'm not really a first thought best thought writer as muchh as i would like to be.

I'm an old school reviser.

Post by **Perdida** » January 3rd, 2009, 6:21 pm

it seems someone's already got yur attention and doesnt need to try hard to keep it either.....*grin*

enjoy your writes

m

Post by **K&D** » January 3rd, 2009, 9:57 pm

maybe the person i've already found is me though? But i say if you can't entertain yourself you certainly can't entertain anyone else, and this way i'l never be bored.

perdida where have you been? glad to hear from you.

Post by **Perdida** » January 5th, 2009, 3:57 pm

if you can't entertain yourself you certainly can't entertain anyone else

True, yes but....that would also depend on what kind of entertainment.

where have i been? wish i could say somewhere special, but nope just home... been busy painting, getting ready for xmas/new year etc.
How bout YOU?

please call me maree.

Post by **K&D** » January 5th, 2009, 6:06 pm

Maree,

I have been with family, lots of them- i come from a recently divorced family and the dynamics are weird. but thats what makes life interesting.

you've caught me too- I thought for a second perhaps i had found someone to peak my interest thusly the short poem. She was older but not wiser- now shes just plain pissed.

She didn't want to play for playing sake, she was looking for commitment for commitment sake. she talked about herself incesently and even when i did get a word in she wouldn't engage with what i was saying, or ask questions...just go on and try to bring it back to her. I was rushing to get out what little i said out of fear of her cutting me off.

Two dates. She talked for hours, I tried to be coy/playfull with her, she acted like no one had ever flirted with her before, it was bad just bad.

oh well I LIVE TO LOVE ANOTHER DAY....with other people

I guess i'll just write a poem.

Post by **Bardmaster** » January 5th, 2009, 7:49 pm

an interesting beat, and quite direct. liked

Post by **Perdida** » January 10th, 2009, 4:24 pm

that's the thing K&D..there's always another day, and other people.

Post by **sweetwater** » January 13th, 2009, 3:17 pm

I've studied now Philosophy
And Jurisprudence, Medicine,—
And even, alas! Theology,—
From end to end, with labor keen;
And here, poor fool! with all my lore
I stand, no wiser than before:

Post by **Nazz** » January 13th, 2009, 4:38 pm

I'm not interesting.
Interesting is boring.

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