Creature of Habit

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Lightning Rod
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Creature of Habit

Post by Lightning Rod » January 6th, 2009, 1:22 am

He was a creature of habit
Lived by the calendar, lived by the clock
TV guide with nothing to show
watch him play with his mental blocks

He was a creature of habit
He shows up on time. each hair in place
a stock car driver in the real rat race
sucks on a battery. runs like a rabbit

A creature of habit
A creature of habit
blind repetition
remembered rendition
wakes up tomorrow in yesterday
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by K&D » January 6th, 2009, 2:18 am

love love loved it...

nice rhythem *snaps
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Post by Lightning Rod » January 6th, 2009, 2:24 am

thanks alyson
a song in progress
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Bardmaster » January 6th, 2009, 12:15 pm

reminds me of a few bureaucrats I know. sharp, LRod, and good luck turning this into a song, to add to your music box collection. I'd like to pick up a few of your books in the weeks to follow. I'll order online. Do you sign them as well?

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Post by SmileGRL » January 6th, 2009, 4:21 pm

"sucks on a battery. runs like a rabbit" 8)

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Post by K&D » January 6th, 2009, 4:38 pm

SmileGRL wrote:"sucks on a battery. runs like a rabbit" 8)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2d2a4Fsmng
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