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SmileGRL
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Post by SmileGRL » January 6th, 2009, 5:09 pm

what if i like stars exploding inside my skin
would you contain me climbing in, drink my scream…

& if my seams unravel while i selfishly gather bird feathers for my soul
would you cup my face in your calm, roll me back into your arms…

& could you still love me then?
even if i'm me…or specially because

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Post by goldenmyst » January 7th, 2009, 10:20 pm

Quite a passionate entreaty you've conjured in art and word. Your poem reverberated in my mind like a poignant dream. The art was extraordinarily beautiful. I was enchanted.

John

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Post by saw » January 9th, 2009, 12:16 pm

very nice....art & words....the first stanza knocked me out...really good stuff, smile................
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Post by SmileGRL » January 27th, 2009, 11:49 am

again...sorry for being so rude. i didn't mean to leave you hanging.


john...thank you kindly, my friend. i am always enchanted by your words.


saw...wow...to knock someone out with words...thaNk you. so much

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Post by Perdida » January 30th, 2009, 4:24 pm

you're making me sigh girl, you're making me sigh.

smile, have missed your words.

thanks lovely

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Post by SmileGRL » January 30th, 2009, 4:33 pm

all sighs and hugs and smiles accepted :wink: you are always welcome to read, maree. in fact you make it a pleasure to share.

i have to run. but have this...

"the candle and the moth crazy around it
say who i am
say i am you"
- rumi -

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