the incompleteness of victory and loss

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the incompleteness of victory and loss

Post by sweetwater » January 9th, 2009, 2:45 pm

postulations in a symphony of words
an opera masking the culture of influence
words in the ambiguous referential
in the aesthetics of capital

the loss of every referential as to ‘origin’
ruled by the dictates of language
and the offerings of his or her art

she
as referring to the necessity of destroying
the demagoguery of a language construct
in a poststructuralism

he
conceptualized in the remembrance
of things past where origins
are borrowed untrue and true

she
moving in the paradigms of the immovable

he
without complaint
posed in the matrix of art and theology
an argument in the poststructure of representation

she
became either the sign of its origin
and significance
or the origin of its sign
and existing as a representation
of its existence

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Post by K&D » January 9th, 2009, 3:05 pm

So when do you (we) get to post-poetry?

I'm post-gay, not post-feminist (getting closer) what about you?


:D :shock: :wink: (post-litterature/post-human)
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love and affection

Post by sweetwater » January 9th, 2009, 5:35 pm

thanks
truly enjoyed the offering!

why don't you write me love poem
internally

and then we can compose
an ode
of love and affection

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Post by K&D » January 9th, 2009, 5:46 pm

sounds awesome!

I dig your interest and I like where your going (course true post-structuralist wouldn't nessisarily say there was an end goal- I.E were not really going anywhere....but thats fun too)

the paradigms of the immovable are a bitch aren't they?
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Post by sweetwater » January 9th, 2009, 5:51 pm

the gender narrative
we can first contest
internally
things i carry
upon my breast

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Post by K&D » January 9th, 2009, 6:06 pm

touche- I heard some white heterosexual say on this webblog that we were living in a post-phallocentric world...its statements like those that make me really want to be a gay women.


did you read this one that i wrote?

rubber balls, plastic nose
buy yourself a hose
and hope it grows.

leaky pipes, dried up damns?
its a cyborg surge
a postmodern catamaran

its kind of like a love poem to the self
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only in retrospect

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