Slick prediction

Post by **Doreen Peri** » January 16th, 2009, 1:42 am

It was nothing but a brush of dust,
a quick ice trick, fickle as
a lover's glance. I ventured out,
took a chance, arrived uneventfully.
No fear here. It was a mere hallucination.

Post by **K&D** » January 16th, 2009, 2:36 am

as it should be! Madness.

if only i could write as sucinct as yourself....love love loved this one.

Post by **Doreen Peri** » January 16th, 2009, 8:32 am

thanks very much K&D

I've been enjoying your new poems, too ... good to see you back hanging out some!

Post by **panta rhei** » January 24th, 2009, 9:48 pm

love those images, doreen.
they paint themselves inside my mind!

Post by **Lightning Rod** » January 24th, 2009, 9:50 pm

don't try the old ice trick on me

Post by **Doreen Peri** » January 24th, 2009, 10:05 pm

Thanks you all..

i actually edited it and expanded upon it to create a series of 5 ... this piece became #1 but it's different now

http://www.studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=15544

Post by **SmileGRL** » January 27th, 2009, 4:51 pm

the short version got lost in the long one. not that it wasn't all brilliant, just...i like this verse being it's own thing.

Post by **justwalt** » February 3rd, 2009, 12:26 am

this is quite different
standing alone nicely...but

none of my hallucinations were" mere",
so I don't get that part completely

Post by **Doreen Peri** » February 3rd, 2009, 12:46 am

thanks smilegrl ... yeah i think it stands alone ok too.. just used it to bounce off of

......

predictions sometimes don't happen

your hallucinations aren't mine

thanks for reading, walt

glad you enjoyed it

Post by **goldenmyst** » February 3rd, 2009, 4:27 pm

A chimera in the mind's eye. I often wonder if those prone to hallucinations, not drug induced, would be more at ease, if they didn't have to worry about it.

John

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