I wanna live in a hick town

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
User avatar
Nazz
Posts: 888
Joined: July 3rd, 2008, 10:28 pm
Location: oh, here and there.

I wanna live in a hick town

Post by Nazz » February 16th, 2009, 2:56 am

I wanna live in a small town, yeah a hick town. I want the cold pure sun to come up over some mountain. Enough of this spray-painted derby. I spent so much time on this grid that my eyes are stenciled. And you can't climb up the damn thing, it gets too steep. I want a meadow, maybe crickets, maybe a flag flapping somewhere like soft noise. Maybe some cattle and dust devils on the road from town. Maybe a pancake house, tack shack on the tracks and bacon and eggs. I want some peace for a change. Damn it's been a while.

Well technically anywhere the road may go is on the grid, but that will be our little secret. I believe I can leave, and shut off the engine. But I noticed the wires seem to follow. In fact a glowing screen followed me when I first ran off to the strange ranges. Imagine pulling up to the great divide only to find it backlit by some lurching broadcast.

If I had time on my hands I might need lurching shadows on strange ranges too. I don't have anything against them, since they drove me there to begin with. The farther out I go the further it looks in. Cowboy poetry and rocks are intensely solo. The road always seems to end there, beneath the peak in a pile of rocks. Only a few odd prospectors and hands know the place, and if they don't then the animals know. Poetry only sniffs at it, or perhaps a soft ferocity of mountain rain. I wanna live there. I can picture it.

saw
Posts: 8695
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Post by saw » February 23rd, 2009, 9:31 pm

I can relate to the message here as I understand it.....i haven't been to a mall in 10 years...too much phony stimulation...carnival barkers leaping out from kiosks to sell you something.....i hear ya brother..
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9713
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 24th, 2009, 10:24 am

Nazz, here's to safe passage home. What a kick!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
Nazz
Posts: 888
Joined: July 3rd, 2008, 10:28 pm
Location: oh, here and there.

Post by Nazz » February 24th, 2009, 4:47 pm

One day I heard some people accusing each other of living in "hick towns", and I thought, "what's the point of that? It couldn't be that different, could it?" But when I had to get away, it needed to be different, you know, out there. Yes, the country folk must have thrown off the yolk of glow-screen cable noise and spoke only fluent Earth. Yes, that's how I pictured it, barreling down the road. Imagine that.

User avatar
mudshark
Posts: 257
Joined: April 13th, 2005, 2:17 pm
Location: Norway

Post by mudshark » February 24th, 2009, 6:40 pm

youre a fine writer. the message is just the extra cream. this made my day! fanazztic!

User avatar
hester_prynne
Posts: 2363
Joined: June 26th, 2006, 12:35 am
Location: Seattle, Washington
Contact:

Post by hester_prynne » February 25th, 2009, 1:56 am

I want to live in a hick town too. Seattle is too big for an old crone like me.
Let's go Nazz!
Great read.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests