Vodka Fury

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 9:02 pm

I'm a jealous sort
I'm particularly jealous of Mr. Gilbey
you know, the vodka man

he has no smell
no aroma
but deadly as
double oh seven

take you to hell or heaven
I get the chills
when Mr. Gilbey
walks in the door
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Nazz » February 28th, 2009, 9:12 pm

I suffer a bit of that affliction,
this afternoon, only for a while.
I can't be completely rational
at this exact moment in time.
Can't be trusted with that.

That presupposes I may have been
rational pre-Vodka, which is most
likely a myth, but there ya go.
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Post by stilltrucking » February 28th, 2009, 9:16 pm

ya leaving me thirsty for more

cheers 8)

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 28th, 2009, 9:25 pm

Wow!

Great images!

That just happens to be the brand of vodka I drink.

Pretty cool!

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 9:29 pm

doreen peri wrote:Wow!

Great images!

That just happens to be the brand of vodka I drink.

Pretty cool!
how did I know that? ....haha
now I must decide
if my muse was yoousse or the booze?
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Post by Doreen Peri » February 28th, 2009, 9:34 pm

whatever your muse was, it was a great one!

what a fabulous poem!

*cheers* ... i toast my Gilbey's vodka martini to you

You should get this published!

THIS is LITERATURE! It's one of the best poems I've ever read in my life.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 9:36 pm

doreen peri wrote:whatever your muse was, it was a great one!

what a fabulous poem!

*cheers* ... i toast my Gilbey's vodka martini to you

You should get this published!

THIS is LITERATURE! It's one of the best poems I've ever read in my life.
you've had too much Gilbey's .....haha
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Post by Nazz » February 28th, 2009, 9:42 pm

I'm sipping a little Smirnoff,
just a little.

It was four dollars more
than Gilbeys. Overpriced by four?
Damn, the whole thing seems over
priced.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 9:45 pm

I like the dark spirits
but only on rare occassion
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Post by Nazz » February 28th, 2009, 10:26 pm

I wish the occasion was
rarer sometimes.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 10:29 pm

don't bother me, I'm drinking
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Nazz » February 28th, 2009, 10:35 pm

Me too.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 28th, 2009, 11:56 pm

Nazz wrote:Me too.
ok, let's stagger down the road arm and shoulder
we'll sing something
out of key
and think we are two carusos
on a binge with blurry stars in our eyes
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by saw » March 1st, 2009, 10:03 am

ABSOLUT-ly !......well done, clay......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Arcadia » March 1st, 2009, 11:14 am

add strawberry or other fruit, si? :wink:

(I have to de-tox from multiple labels beers and wines two day camping by the swimming pool at the moment!! :lol: )

funny thread!!!!

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