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Post by HaroHalola » March 10th, 2009, 10:27 am

The cave within
streams, venous
Veta Madre -
canals
Venetian unblind
messageslats
feral thoughts atame

Cavern castellan
Langerhan College aisles, et...
(Hippocampus)
tunnel for funnels
for tunnels
from Akashia

in the afterglow
unwalls in Haroglyphs...

Portraits
inRhyme-to-Reason
reasons to Rhyme...
as the crime perpets
subsumes, subsumes...

these
spewed
renewed
to
the
unignorable
the icydicies
not worth the saving?
accountable to none?

Jack splatter
does, what It matters to a poor
oppossum platter flatter than a pamcake
a Jack Prattler SUG Prayer Breakfast
of clean coal & a hole in your Soul, Jack!?

At Dawn Darwin-loses!
Galapagoin’ cruises
loosed in
unarrested human staging
Return Of The Dueling Dodos
Playing now @ a Planete`
over, You...

To War or
Not to War
Is this
The Question?
Nay, the Echo!
The movement of
$B-$B-$B’s...!
From our greased bowels
For The War On Peace, en minae
The longerestive Vaudevillain slickery
Capita-lists, staged-unstage
(The Pirates Of Penance?)
Playing now (in Biospfear[r]) @ a Planete`
over, You...

The Endtrails...

Over, you...
chosen jamfles warming
in the afterglow
the radiant Paraclete Sundown
dimmed for the premonishments'
UnWalls walled to the Haroglyphs.

H.e.m.
2.16.MMix.
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Post by mtmynd » March 10th, 2009, 6:41 pm

i enjoyed this one, HH

the flow intrigued me
as if i was helpless
but wanted to see
where i was going
and how i ended up
not unlike a damned
roller coaster ride only
the frame was made of
ancient bones strung
together with smoked hemp
and the cackling of an old
woman never ceased
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Post by HaroHalola » March 11th, 2009, 6:30 am

Hello, mtnmynd - You have uplifted in commenting to this, for you, "A Coney Island of the Mind," beginning in the reaches of the risk to ride the velocepede up... & then down & down...into the depths to the known-unknown, unique in Its character to punch your ticket before & after the ride - TY, pleased to oblige with the continued cackling of the "Doublebubbletoilandtroublers!" H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by goldenmyst » March 11th, 2009, 10:58 am

I am amazed at your breadth and depth of your knowledge and your poetic acumen. I am left starry eyed and amazed having traveled the vortex of your magnificat.

John

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Post by HaroHalola » March 12th, 2009, 9:16 am

Hello, John goldenmyst (a picturesque of an Indigene) - TY, your comments are humbling; what I do (as I believe with every Creative person) was/is a matter of excavating the "already," i.e., realizing the Akashics through the transmission/receptor Channel connection; this is not to say the process is not one (or many) of honing skills through application/research married to "Breathe & get out of the way!" The Gift will not be denied... Van Gogh left us all Starry-Eyed, n'est-ce pas? . So, conjointly we happily travel (into) the vortex, encountering that ever-formidable Magnificat, a character being developed by the equally formidable UnaT. Stay tuned - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by hester_prynne » March 13th, 2009, 12:11 am

I dug the ride too, found myself giddily hanging on to that word icydicies for some reason, just love that word whatever it means.....
H 8)
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Post by stilltrucking » March 13th, 2009, 1:02 pm

a lot of iceydicey words
many
haroglyphs
I probably missed half of them
even so poetry is too wonderful for me to comment on
Ha!

but mostly I like any poem with the word "jack" in it. :wink:
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Post by Arcadia » March 13th, 2009, 4:45 pm

oh!

delicious gondola ride
in poetic & neo way
to the Vonnegut spectrums of Light
Tolstoi & Shakespeare´s
cabarets iconography
& philosophy & ecomomy abisal
undergrounge´s
Waters

:lol: enjoyed, gracias!!!!!!! :D

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Post by HaroHalola » March 13th, 2009, 9:40 pm

h_p - TY, as always; I'm gonna make a cardinal rule & divulge: "icydicies," though by virtue of your sonic resonance have gleaned some intent, pronounced a) icy-dicies = less-than-savory individuals; b) i-SID-uh-sees = someones also unsavory, but prehistoric troglodytes (ref: http://wwwartandsole.smfforfree2.com/in ... 535.0.html), perhaps. H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by HaroHalola » March 13th, 2009, 9:54 pm

st - Hey, you've already commented! I am humbled, a few fans more-than-trump the detractors; but moreover, the messages I am striving to impart are falling unto caring, audiofactory lobears - TY - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by stilltrucking » March 13th, 2009, 10:00 pm

Yeah sorry about the edit I must have been doing it while you were posting. I added a stinkin emoticon, best not to take any chances.

I enjoyed condensedicity of the poem. I resist the temptation to google rather mull it over for a while
but I will probably have to search for a couple of words , the Latin at least.
Spanish maybe "Veta Madre" i thought it referred to the dark sea within us.(Freud, the archeologist of my soul)
thanks for the reply to the reply

You know me I am so got dam paranoid and vain I thought the poem was about me.

Clean coal
I believe it
just a matter of faith I suppose.

please pardon the ramble

thank you

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Post by HaroHalola » March 14th, 2009, 1:22 am

...and the waters of Arcadia cascade... Oh, TY! - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by HaroHalola » March 14th, 2009, 11:01 am

st - TY; sure, allow the thick to thicker, percolate; hey, we're all seachin', ain't we? You know, as for Veta Madre, your interp./resonance might be a facet, & certainly my aim is to elicit meaning-beyond-meaning... YW; "paranoid?" Is not this/every about every & all? Ramble-on, bro, & (should there be) next Xmas the Jolly One will (if you're a mindful Soul) avoid bringing some o' dat clean coal fer yer stockings hanged by the clean chimney des-pair - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by mudshark » March 14th, 2009, 12:48 pm

nice, nice. the riddles of the ryhms,isnt it? definition mission, man!
strikes, me though. its all done in a coupla minutes, hu? just felt like you wright very fast. streamie, you know.

stilltracking: you crack me up. still. stillcracking.

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Post by HaroHalola » March 14th, 2009, 9:54 pm

Halloen, mudshark - TY; yes this is moi, "riddles-of-the-rhymes-definitions-man..." LOL! SOC, composed rather rapidly (as enumerated in another reply), you have struck another nerve, a dear friend/cohort entered my life w/"...crackin' me/I'm crackin'!" Look forward to more of you re: my Work - H'H./H.e.m.
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