Long Night

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saw
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Long Night

Post by saw » March 17th, 2009, 9:01 am

it can be a long night
when you're waiting
for inspiration
hours feel like vampire eternity

feels like forever
when you catch yourself
tabulating breath
a millionaire loser, endless

when the rigid darkness
is jet black and tarred
and penetration of any kind
is out of the question

it can be a long night
when you document
the perceptible growth
of a deviant wild hair
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » March 17th, 2009, 9:29 am

a deviant wild hair
has helped me through many a long night





hard morning
bleary eyed
this screen hurting my eyes
but glad I read your poem

saw
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Post by saw » March 17th, 2009, 5:39 pm

thanx truck, glad you could relate a little....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by stilltrucking » March 17th, 2009, 10:17 pm

ten four on the "a little"

There is no darkness in my life anymore, and I miss it.

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