Breakin' Even

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Lightning Rod
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Breakin' Even

Post by Lightning Rod » April 7th, 2009, 10:54 am

Ain't got no money
Ain't got no debts
I came here with nothin'
still got most of it left.

Breakin' Even, yeah I'm
Breakin' Even
I ain't grievin'
and I ain't leavin'
the books are fixed
I'm not deceivin'
cuz I'm
Breakin' Even
Breakin' Even

I looked in on my bank account
on the bottom line it didn't amount to much
but I was
Breakin' Even
Breakin' Even

melted all my credit cards
locked my house and parked my cars
but I was
Breakin' Even
Breakin' Even

Breakin' Even, yeah I'm
Breakin' Even
I ain't grievin'
and I ain't leavin'
the books are fixed
I'm not deceivin'
cuz I'm
Breakin' Even
Breakin' Even

Ain't got no money
Ain't got no debts
I came here with nothin'
still got most of it left.

but I'm Breakin' Even
yeah, I'm Breakin' Even....etc...
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Nazz
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Post by Nazz » April 8th, 2009, 4:50 am

"I came here with nothing,
still got most of it left"

True enough,
except for those negative numbers, maybe...
drunken mathematical construction...

Seems like quite the show you're writing, LR.

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