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Post by HaroHalola » April 9th, 2009, 7:00 pm

Note: Lest we ought 'Cross the Hill afore Passingover...?/NATURE DOES NOT HURRY, YET EVERYTHING IS ACCOMPLISHED - Lao Tze
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A faster car, a
faster computer, faster-
acting antacid

faster service, an
Xpress check-out, a faster
return, a faster

delivery, faster
acting, living in Faster-
Land, for a faster

result, a Disney-
Whirl on the outerskirts of
Criminalsburg (past

Hurrysburg, PA)
bulletrades on the E-train
speedialed, speediern'

AlkaSeltzer burst
bubbles, bigger rude, hotter
nudes, faster foods

faster route, bigger
snout on the speedway, faster
than speeding bullets

fastern' the fast laned
SuperCurl, SupeSuperGlue!
& litmus turn blue?

Faster turnaround
time to backwards cheat, dancin'
as fast as ya can?


S L O W...
Le Plus que Lente...take the ES-
CarGo
& drive with

lobster hands, support
the I.T.C.P.D. - cause-
non-celibre` - The 1st.

International
Tumultaneous Cell Phone
Day;
reconnoit to

miss the plane/train/game,
& a faster break, divorce
Disney, no return

there not "Late-Late for
a very important dates,
goodbye... I'll stay &

let my fingers do
the walking", hurry-up &
wait computeless, eat

right, leftovers, fast
food not, slowfoodist moodist
fastidious, the

fastway hungray, Road-
runner/Speedy Gonzalez -
Andeleandel...!

Not so swift, Johnny
ya cain't match quippin' fastern'
Jack Robinson, eh?

Then drive a hybrid
Terrapin, the only shell
mobile for goin'

through the driveslow, speed
bumps your head, Mr. Moment
umm; in the moment

stays the connection
on the vorizon, the pause
that defreshes Urb

And buttons fasten
better without the snappin',
Snappin'!? Xpress check-

out, scan the scanner -
Queues Brevis-Vida Longa!
A fa$ter Eddie,

Fa$tCa$hFa$t on the
outerskirts of Crim'nilsburg
fastrack Fastow on

an end ron, 'cept all
for a fastdrying, faster
dissolve, Bubhub!, but

Nature don't hurry,
yet everything's accomplished

Lao Tze, yowtsayu?

But, the time for a
tasty hasty; aft, a crave
of HastyTasty?

Where ya goin' to
Ms. Hurry, Mr. Rabbit
Transit, down the hole?

Y'all know the score, don't
care to dare break It if'n
It ain't fixed, Hub-Bubs.

H.e.m
4.3.MMix.
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Post by Nazz » April 11th, 2009, 3:41 am

I agree. Fast has had its day.
Slower would be much better,
until you don't pay on time,
of course.

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Post by Arcadia » April 11th, 2009, 11:25 am

:lol:

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Post by HaroHalola » April 21st, 2009, 11:14 am

Hello Nazz/Arcadia - For expedience sake, TY for the "comments," & if I decide to attempt a Read on "The 8," the approach might be a rapid-fire/slow rendering coupled-with a slower rendering of a blizzard - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by mtmynd » April 21st, 2009, 6:38 pm

Lao Tze was no SLOth
with a mind quicker
than his own mouth
your poem creeped
into my head
as i read what was said
and could[n't] agree
more (nor less) than
lao and haro in deed-E
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Post by HaroHalola » April 22nd, 2009, 9:23 am

mtmynd - I am humbled; seemingly, the small spate of Readers to this Work are missing the message. I have my theories as to why, which are moot, if they are not being head-crept. Perhaps things move too fast & complicated to simply grasp? TY, as always for your participation - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by Nazz » April 22nd, 2009, 12:00 pm

I'm sloooooooooooooooooooow!
(But I'll get there too!)

B.T.W.... stellar.

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