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keithalanhamilton
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feels like home

Post by keithalanhamilton » April 27th, 2009, 4:58 pm

grew up near river and lake
matter of fact the Great Lakes
the fresh water stuff, inland
far away from the salty sea
and then things do change
moved out east to the coast
next to the deep blue ocean
that one called the Atlantic
which kind is really better
you know the fresh or salty
all about the same it seems
its land that feels like home

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Post by judih » April 27th, 2009, 11:09 pm

mind and body connect
land starts to sizzle neath the toes
when you get there
there's no confusion
soul feels home
mind tags along
heart begins to bloom

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Post by keithalanhamilton » April 28th, 2009, 6:50 pm

Judih,
something about land
feeling secure maybe
water more unsettling
beautiful to gaze upon
but the smell of soil
just grounds the soul

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