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Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:16 am

and i am not afraid
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Post by hester_prynne » May 16th, 2009, 2:16 am

What's going on?
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Post by mnaz » May 16th, 2009, 2:21 am

Hi Hes! Just havin' a little friendly conversation about unfairly and irrationally attacking things that other people wrote, and not letting it go, that's all. You're welcome to join us! Grab a late nite snack or something.

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Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:23 am

im seriously not trying to do some injustice, it was offensive, say what you want, but it was an attack on many
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read that thrice

Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:24 am

read that thrice
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Post by mnaz » May 16th, 2009, 2:27 am

"It was an attack on many"

What? What attack? What do you mean?

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must you need understand

Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:28 am

must you need understand...no...and thats it...
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Post by mnaz » May 16th, 2009, 2:33 am

I need you to quit hiding behind your mumbling bullshit, that's what I'd prefer at this point in time. Why did you take it upon yourself to attack this particular writer on the world-wide-web for no particular reason? Love ya, by the way...

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alright then

Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:48 am

if i must, reread it for yourself, maybe three times, it was a quite simple piece, it was derogitory in its lack of even pretending to be nice, the message was quite simple
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Post by mnaz » May 16th, 2009, 2:58 am

Derogatory? Oh that's a good one. Actually, the poem of maybe finding content in no apparent content was an inspired take if you ask me. If you're going to berate this particular author several times in a row, then man up and tell us why. It's really that simple.
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you dum dum head

Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 2:59 am

you dum dum head, so there...
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well um

Post by sonofthesun » May 16th, 2009, 3:08 am

well um....no one did ask you, so go read a book and find something else to do, other than be annoying, and i did state my grievance, if i must again...it is a lack of, the pretending you know what it is, when its obvious you dont...suck on that...keep pretending...see where that gets you
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Post by mnaz » May 16th, 2009, 3:18 am

Tell us why you object to this poem-- why you feel the need to needlessly fuck with it for four, five, six rounds. You haven't come close to telling us yet-- I mean, besides accusing the author of being a dick-- like five times in a row or something like that. C'mon, let's hear it. We're waiting.

Never mind. I can't believe I made the last six posts.

Never mind.

As you were.

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well um

Post by sonofthesun » May 18th, 2009, 11:25 pm

i guess its not obvious...not sure why...if you read it more than once it should say what it says quite obviously, need i explain it line for line, maybe im missing it, maybe im unable to read its meaning...but truthfully it is offensive and or needless, sorry if i have misunderstood, sorry if ive taken it the wrong way, but to me it is an attack on everything that does not contain something someone else has already done, this content thing...who is it that decides, not you, content is from the maker, get over yourself and make shit up, fuck what others think, who are they anyway
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Post by still.trucking » May 19th, 2009, 11:04 am

I read every poem as if I was the poet who wrote it. A poem is always about me. I am crazy that way.

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