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Post by **constantine** » May 16th, 2009, 4:19 pm

thought i'd hit the alleys
roll a few numbers
i like the feeling of power
when the ball smashes into the pins
chain reaction
my own bikini atoll
i saw her at the counter
white shorts, creased
pink cashmere sweater
rack em up
the boys were shooting nine ball
crazy pocket action
spins and bank jobs
there's always a shot
i followed her to the parking lot
blacktop asphalt
crushed glass sparkling
like a milky way in hell
i held the door open

Post by **Yejun** » May 16th, 2009, 5:34 pm

Well done.

Does she get in, go back, or call the police?

Post by **constantine** » May 16th, 2009, 6:01 pm

hell if i know!

Post by **Yejun** » May 16th, 2009, 7:08 pm

What, your character won't tell you the end of the story?

Yeah, I got one like that. I think he hates me because I named him Edwin Schrodinger Zukosky.

Post by **still.trucking** » May 16th, 2009, 7:12 pm

you Took my mind away for a while with this one dino
took me rightout of dis funk

Mickey Spillane knew women.

Post by **constantine** » May 16th, 2009, 7:17 pm

he can wrap them around his little finger.

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