aliCe, where did you go?

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aliCe, where did you go?

Post by SmileGRL » June 2nd, 2009, 3:44 pm

her voiCe was cleaR as bells on fingers
"groW me an antique hair brush
& a roSe in my hair
& i'll be the sweetheaRt that you seek.
i'll serve you creaM @ teaTime,
straWberries in crystal gLass,
shoRtbread on sticks
& vanilla coconut icing oN me"
wHat did she say? she speaks
but i doN't understand a woRd
shh! listeN.
gLue me a bird on a branch
& him inSide my eye
and i'll tell you what she said
she said, "lover,
i'll be your cake any aNy time"
how? easy would that bE
like bells on fingers easy
iNstead she hides
the laughing porcelain cat
like an abandoned egg in a neSt
he feels lonely & sO very faR away
she dreams of him @ night but.
aliCe, where did you go?
he's the candy iNside the cLock
shh! looK.
she wanders bLindly
inside her seCret garden
absentmindedly kiSsing bird beaks
& plucking minutes from trees
turN your rosy cheek. kiss kisS
so surreal. waKe up!
i love him so veRy much but.
he's noT here when here is reaL
alice, wheN did you leave?
& walt, whaT did the doorman say?


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Post by justwalt » June 3rd, 2009, 8:03 pm

FEED YOUR HEAD...FEED YOUR HEAD...

missed ya
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Post by mtmynd » June 4th, 2009, 1:40 pm

slick little piece, full of grace and all... ;)

enjoyed, mj, as usual.
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Post by SmileGRL » June 4th, 2009, 3:00 pm

thank you both.

got ya. missed you too, walt.

i don't feel very graceful right now, cecil. maybe more of the "and all" 8)

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Post by mtmynd » June 4th, 2009, 3:11 pm

i'm sorry to hear you're not feeling as graceful as you should. i know you look stunning when your grace is with you.

but i'll let you in on a little secret, mj... shhh... my use of the two words, slick and grace, was meant as a conjunct to "feed you head" as 'White Rabbit' was sung by Grace Slick with the Jefferson Airplane way back when hippies ruled the world. please don't tell anyone i said that, okay? it dates me pretty far ago... tyvm :lol:
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Post by SmileGRL » June 4th, 2009, 3:18 pm

very clever. 8) (don't worry. my lips are sealed :wink: )

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Post by hester_prynne » June 4th, 2009, 11:43 pm

You know, I could read volumes of your poems and never tire of them.
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Post by sweetwater » June 5th, 2009, 11:04 am

poetry as monographic illustraTion

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Post by SmileGRL » June 5th, 2009, 2:26 pm

wow...that is probably the biggest compliment i have ever received. thank you so very much, miss Hes. that deserves a kiss, planted and blown

sweetwater...exactly. thanK you for reading.

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Post by constantine » June 5th, 2009, 2:49 pm

it's like entering a world - seeing with your eyes. very nice!

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Post by SmileGRL » June 5th, 2009, 2:54 pm

...or a secret garden :wink:

thanks dino

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Post by Perdida » June 7th, 2009, 5:32 am

I was glued to every word emjay, had my eyes flitting around the room...wonderful imagery.

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Post by .Lucy. » June 8th, 2009, 9:24 am

Sets the reader to thinking...

Interesting read, SmileGRL
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Post by SmileGRL » June 11th, 2009, 1:57 pm

thanks ladies. glad i had you glued :wink:

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