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.Lucy.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 8th, 2009, 6:04 pm

I took a step forward
yet somehow was yanked back.

By whom, it's uncertain-
as the invisible hand of life
left no fingerprints on my skin.

This is all I know:
My steps left no tracks
in the muddy earth.
Under the rainy sheet of circumstance
my path was blurred, gone.

So I must go back
and start again,
unable to remember where I traveled
when my footing was less secure.

6-8-09
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Post by hester_prynne » June 8th, 2009, 6:48 pm

Indeed, my wise old soul friend. I needed this today.
Thank you for this timely, and soothingly brilliant read.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Perdida » June 9th, 2009, 4:52 am

is all we can do, go back and start again...

fantastic!

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