past daily life

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keithalanhamilton
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past daily life

Post by keithalanhamilton » June 27th, 2009, 9:32 am

our daily humanity through living
as information, stored within Nature’s energy
captured in segments of time, awaiting
remembrance by some unknown mechanism
a translator, again exposing what was
concerning a past daily life lived as humanity

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Post by still.trucking » June 27th, 2009, 10:38 am

daily mundane miracles continue from-
that moment a baby drawals it's first breath
by some unknown mechanism
that some call God

pardon my gut reaction
my first thought

thank you for the poem

it was this line that tripped my trigger
as information, stored within Nature’s energy
"Natural selection, as it has operated in human history, favors not only the clever but the murderous." Barbara Ehrenreich

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Post by keithalanhamilton » June 27th, 2009, 2:53 pm

still.trucking,

thanks for sharing your gut reaction with me. :wink:

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Post by still.trucking » June 27th, 2009, 3:09 pm

I was not proud of it. 8)
"Natural selection, as it has operated in human history, favors not only the clever but the murderous." Barbara Ehrenreich

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Post by keithalanhamilton » June 27th, 2009, 3:21 pm

just part of being a self-evolving system named Sue within time. 8)

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Post by still.trucking » June 29th, 2009, 7:37 am

That was a heckuva poem Keith.
It was "poetry at its best."



Keith wrote:
just part of being a self-evolving system named Sue within time


A system that evolves freely is potentially very adaptable and creative. It could also become nearly anything, with consequences ranging from the annoying to the disastrous. It is likely unlimited self-evolution will need to be contained carefully even as we mine it for truly new inventions. The arrows nicely hint at a chaos-star as well as replication.


http://www.aleph.se/andart/archives/200 ... orrow.html
"Natural selection, as it has operated in human history, favors not only the clever but the murderous." Barbara Ehrenreich

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Post by keithalanhamilton » June 29th, 2009, 9:13 am

A system that evolves freely is potentially very adaptable and creative. It could also become nearly anything, with consequences ranging from the annoying to the disastrous. It is likely unlimited self-evolution will need to be contained carefully even as we mine it for truly new inventions. The arrows nicely hint at a chaos-star as well as replication.


http://www.aleph.se/andart/archives/200 ... orrow.html
Living systems like humans appear to transitionally undergo a dynamic process of autopoiesis due to being a dissipative structure. The process of autopoiesis within living systems, may be possible due to the memory retentive ability of Nature’s energy to store information through cognitive feedback loops. :)
"I'm sort of an evolving ism per say, who chaotically is seeking during much struggle through effort within the process of thinking an ordered pattern to my thoughts and words; seemingly I'm doing so through a process of stability that's dynamically transitional, which seems to me to be a recurrently cognitive mental activity within Nature as a whole system in the physical."

"I'm spiritually a mystic mainly due to the intuitively emotive sensitivity of My Abnormalities Normality, seemingly embodied with a heightened empathic perceptivity; who within this felt sense of being a mystic, I spiritually and empathically observe the process of dynamically stable, characteristically identifiable, transitionally recurrent patterns of systemic order; while during the unfold and enfold of systemic process, these dynamically stable, characteristically identifiable, transitionally recurrent patterns of systemic order are revealed to me within My Empathic Mysticism; revealed to me as being individualized aspects of systemic process within all of Nature as a whole system in the physical."

~Keith Alan Hamilton~

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