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Lightning Rod
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Orthodontics

Post by Lightning Rod » July 11th, 2009, 3:30 pm

Orthodontics

the overbite was what got me
she saw it as an imperfection
to me it was a pure joy beauty mark
a quarter inch of fond variation

made it easier to find her lingual g-spot
and fit my every lobe when she nibbled
I loved that overbite

I got a kick in the teeth one day
I heard that she had married an orthodontist

It took me months to get over it
my heart was broken
losing her was bad enough
but to see her overbite in braces
vanishing day by day in increments
slowly pulled into line
I needed novacaine

I don't blame the dentist for stealing her
I would have stolen her myself
but I'll never forgive him for
stealing the overbite.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by revolutionrabbit » July 11th, 2009, 6:53 pm

they don't call it over bite for nothing
but what do they call under bite?

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Post by SmileGRL » July 13th, 2009, 5:22 pm

i think i read this one of yours before, yes? even so, great sentiment, clay. & how are you?

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