Letting you go

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Letting you go

Post by hester_prynne » August 2nd, 2009, 3:44 am

I floated over your antics
for a long long time my love.

Held your fickles in my heart,
grieved your shallows
in the dark.

A depth of love,
neither one of us could show,
one that I alone will know,
in this sweet fallout,
of letting you go.


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Post by Perdida » August 2nd, 2009, 10:33 am

Sooo Bittersweet, you always move me Hester.

m :D
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Post by keithalanhamilton » August 2nd, 2009, 10:40 am

This part was really great..... :D
Held your fickles in my heart,
grieved your shallows
in the dark.

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Post by Arcadia » August 2nd, 2009, 3:52 pm

Billie & Hester jamming together... wow!!!!!!!! :D

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Post by SmileGRL » August 3rd, 2009, 3:56 pm

heartbreakingly beautiful, miss hes. you touch deep as always.

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Post by .Lucy. » August 6th, 2009, 12:27 pm

Moving, and beautifully rhythmic...
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Post by saw » August 21st, 2009, 10:47 am

beautiful in its simplicity and economy of words.....a simple message on unrequited love with real impact........really like this, hester.....
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Post by Perdida » August 24th, 2009, 5:32 pm

I really wish I had written this. :D
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