I Once Believed In Dreams

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I Once Believed In Dreams

Post by Lightning Rod » August 9th, 2009, 10:40 pm

the dream was disturbing
not because you were there
I won't describe it, I can't
watching what I was not
supposed to see

there was a shallow bath
and frantic garish sex
sex done for the camera
more than for the actors
black and white, then technicolor

I wouldn't call it a nightmare
but I forced myself to awaken
tangled in my fears and sodden covers
I once believed in dreams
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by mousey1 » August 9th, 2009, 11:45 pm

This reminds me of a dream I once had
Jean Luc Picard
standing there in his all together
light saber at the ready! :shock:
Talk about technicolor!

I'm telling you, dreamland, you never know what dreams will come.

You don't have to believe in dreams, they only have to believe in you.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by still.trucking » August 10th, 2009, 11:38 am

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Post by stilltrucking » August 11th, 2009, 12:58 am

at first I was going to just post a blank text box in reply to your poem.

Because I was thinking about Nietzsche's bit about great art requiring no comment. Something like that. Just a blank text box to say I have read your poem and it left me wordless.

I don't know if it is as good as I think it is.

You know I don't know nothing about poetry

I can barely hear it.

But once in a while one will sink in

and I reply with got dam smiley

I figured for what ever the poem meant to you I thought you might be pleased to know how much it meant to me.

I have a woman in my dreams for over thirty years. Always the same woman although I never see her face, which she always keeps hidden in shadow. If not for her I would not a have any love life at all. I think it is Silent Woman.

thanks Clay
power piece I thought
but I should have sat on my hands and just enjoyed it.
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Post by stilltrucking » August 11th, 2009, 1:00 am

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 11th, 2009, 4:12 pm

thanks mousey and truck

dreams and poetry and prophesy all have much in common
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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