Lahdeedaws, fiddledeedees

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
User avatar
hester_prynne
Posts: 2363
Joined: June 26th, 2006, 12:35 am
Location: Seattle, Washington
Contact:

Lahdeedaws, fiddledeedees

Post by hester_prynne » August 22nd, 2009, 3:57 pm

Slippin the grip of dander,
my flight gains speed in
droves.
Threats of crash,
looks of horror and disdain.
Old pains, no gains.

Flippin some lip at grandeur,
my choke is easy and my burden
rasps.
Drowns of guilt,
gyp me of regrets.
Impulsive bets, in buried debts.

Spittin some hip with candor,
danger has lost it's mutely
pose.
I look in the mirror.
Don't know who I sees.
Lahdeedaws, fiddledeedees.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

User avatar
Nazz
Posts: 888
Joined: July 3rd, 2008, 10:28 pm
Location: oh, here and there.

Post by Nazz » August 22nd, 2009, 5:01 pm

Love it.

Gyp me of regrets.
Bury my debts. Yes!

User avatar
constantine
Posts: 2677
Joined: March 9th, 2008, 9:45 am

Post by constantine » August 22nd, 2009, 7:00 pm

this is so wild! inspired work.

saw
Posts: 8695
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Post by saw » August 22nd, 2009, 7:50 pm

the story of dander, grandeur and candor, the fire-breathing triplets from Barnum & Bailey.......pretty groovy lingo, hester.......that leads somewhere !........enjoyed...it's been a good day for poetry....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests