circus breath

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mtmynd
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circus breath

Post by mtmynd » September 13th, 2009, 1:28 pm

<center>circus breath
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the
final
word
can be
fatal
but
probably
not
final
not
probably
but
fatal
can be
word
final
the
fatal
word
may
not
be the
final
word
heard
word
final
be the
not
may
word
fatal
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Post by justwalt » September 13th, 2009, 4:54 pm

I like this poem, even if there are only ten words in it...
(not including the title)

walt

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 13th, 2009, 5:43 pm

wheeeeeee! i'm on a merry-go-round! heh

love the word play

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Post by sweetwater » September 14th, 2009, 11:06 am

in order to center the poem
is that something that could be added
to the message body?

i like the colour
but i think the centering could
be readily available as an option

any hints and centering

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Post by hester_prynne » September 14th, 2009, 10:21 pm

Ah yes!
I imagine this being spoken over a microphone, under a sky full of trapeze artists.
Dig it lotsly!
You so rock Cec.
H 8)
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Post by mtmynd » September 14th, 2009, 10:49 pm

Thx much, justwalt... nice of you to stop in. (actually 11 words: 'heard' being the subversive one... ;))

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you look so happy here, Dor'... glad you liked the ride. thank you!

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in order to center the poem
is that something that could be added
to the message body?
I'm not sure I follow, s'water.... are you inquiring about how to center text? let me know. i'll help if i can. thx for stopping in! :)

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You always bring me a smile, Hes'... even when I read your replies on other threads.

Thank you, my friend... you're a pleasure. ;)
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Post by hester_prynne » September 14th, 2009, 11:01 pm

Cec, it takes one to know one.... :wink:
Thank you!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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