When the truth your telling yourself loses its truth

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sonofthesun
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When the truth your telling yourself loses its truth

Post by sonofthesun » December 4th, 2009, 3:14 am

Its time
as a cat i have sat
but the mouse is now spotted
instead of plates shifting
it is now earthquakes and volcanic eruptions
and if not
i shall be swallowed by samsara
atleast within this one
of the infinite mirrors
we bow to as reality
There is no empty space

saw
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Post by saw » December 4th, 2009, 9:51 am

says alot about our infinitesimal participation in the whole thing....
it's humbling for sure, to give yourself a reason to get out of bed, when we consider this....nicely done
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Location: location infers reality... reality is still a theory

Post by justwalt » December 6th, 2009, 1:36 am

By your faith you are healed...
not anyone else's.

(nice piece)

walt

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Post by stilltrucking » December 6th, 2009, 3:23 am

I liked it a lot too Son of a sun
Gives me hope

Below the line don't mean nothing just a jam
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