traveling lightly

Post by **saw** » November 28th, 2009, 1:27 am

memories spin
measured pinwheels
cycle in and out of decades
these days the deja
with the vu-vu-voom

I see the reruns
the actors and actresses
have been cleverly replaced
with aliens intent
on teaching lessons lost

turning a mish mash life
into a fabulous fable, turning
an old man into
a humble student that carries all
his belongings strapped to his back

Post by **goldenmyst** » November 28th, 2009, 1:31 am

Saw, I dig this. How we create yarns about the good old days and lost love. The last line was priceless.

John

Post by **Arcadia** » November 28th, 2009, 9:25 am

I like the sound in it, gracias!

Post by **saw** » November 29th, 2009, 11:23 am

thanx so much, john & arcadia......

Post by **hester_prynne** » November 29th, 2009, 4:03 pm

F'in fantastic read, last verse is brilliant, so right on.
H

Post by **saw** » December 4th, 2009, 9:48 am

thanx hester, always a pleasure

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