Does it really meter?

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Does it really meter?

Post by Doreen Peri » December 21st, 2009, 11:53 am

To give your lines a sense of meter,
gives the song a singing voice.
You can rhyme if you want .. (you rhyme or you don't),
but meter, to me, is not even a choice.

That's just the way it comes outa me.
I hear it with meter inside of my head.
For some it's a tool, I guess, but for me
it' more like the damn metrofuckingnome your piano teacher put on the top of the fricking piano that won't turn off, instead!

heh ... last long line a tribute to Ogden Nash.

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Post by Lightning Rod » December 21st, 2009, 7:46 pm

for my part
I listen to the heart
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Steve Plonk » December 22nd, 2009, 12:00 am

Sometime it rhyme,
Sometime it won't,
Sometimes it gots a beat,
Sometimes it don't.
Speaking with the within
Tells a heart where its been.

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Post by mtmynd » December 22nd, 2009, 11:54 am

writing is another art form where the writer seeks a compositional balance where the flow is easy and moving to the reader, especially themselves, the worst of critics. this flow certainly requires a meter along with all else when composing.

nice composition, Dor'... tyvm
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Post by Doreen Peri » December 22nd, 2009, 11:56 am

tick tock tick tock.
meter exists in my head
like a clock.

tock tick tock tick.
get me a pen
and some paper quick!

(thanks for reading and commenting, Lrod, Steve & Cecil!)

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Post by saw » December 23rd, 2009, 4:42 am

nice avatar, you wuz a cute little thing.....the internal meter you speak of is the rhythm of your soul.......peace, and happy rhythm !
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Post by mnaz » December 23rd, 2009, 4:38 pm

I find it meters more, lately. Even rhymes at times.

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