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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » January 1st, 2010, 6:53 pm

I was on a hillside above the ocean
the moon was full
firecrackers are going off in various directions
as the reflections are cast upon the ocean. Love looks different now
from a distance
I watched the events of my life like a movie
in slow motion
I had left when it was too painful
but my body was still there
going thru the motions
pretending it was ok
I stopped
I know love
what it looks like, feels like...
I am safe now
I forgot once! Not for long
like a spider bite
it s venom has a way of reminding us
how powerful the small creatures are
weaving strands of silk into the sweetness of my heart
healing what was broken
I was here on the hillside on ten acres welcoming the new year!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » January 1st, 2010, 7:14 pm

I love it. funny how the smallest moments are sometimes the biggest indelible memories. hard to explain.

saw
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Post by saw » January 2nd, 2010, 12:18 pm

it's easy to miss the good stuff if we're going way over the speed limit,

a fine poem for the new year........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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