am i worthy of print

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sonofthesun
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am i worthy of print

Post by sonofthesun » January 12th, 2010, 1:47 am

these thoughts
a precious piece
before my forgiveness
given hopeful
of someones recognition
may i one day be cool
laughs, fuck that shit
the blessing in a curse
wait till i am dead
There is no empty space

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Post by saw » January 17th, 2010, 2:30 pm

an unexpected twist,.... poignant and humorous
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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