Bad Poem No 4

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achilles
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Bad Poem No 4

Post by achilles » February 12th, 2010, 10:59 am

YES I'M THE HEEL

considering my grandparents were born
in the toe of italy it's not that much of a walk
to understand i am the heel.
i used to think of myself as a heal but as time
moves on i see the truth.

now that we have that settled, i can "kick back"
and tell you nothing because nothing is worth
telling

alan watts used to think so

achilles
2/12/10
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Post by Arcadia » February 12th, 2010, 5:39 pm

bienvenido, achilles! :) one of my grandparents and four of my grand-grandparents were born in Italy´s triangle-ball, the rest up on the boot and in Brazil, so what can I say..? :lol: Enjoy your staying here! :wink:
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Post by Lightning Rod » February 12th, 2010, 6:15 pm

heel yes!
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye
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Post by hester_prynne » February 12th, 2010, 11:29 pm

Heels are often the heals.
Snappin folks into whut's real!

You're not a heel achilles.
Heels ain't got no feels.

H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Post by achilles » February 13th, 2010, 11:55 am

thank you thank you thank you thank you
and you and you and you
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