Men think about sex every six seconds (re-posted from 'Go')

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Men think about sex every six seconds (re-posted from 'Go')

Post by bennie » February 9th, 2005, 3:04 pm

Men think about sex every six seconds
Caution: Surface may be slippery
A car backfires pigeons scatter

Men think about sex every six seconds
There are saxaphones for sale in Cash Convertors
The blue Trongate clock says 9.35

Men think about sex every six seconds
A girl with a Pixie face gets off the bus
She had been playing with her hair for 20 minutes

Men think about sex every six seconds
George Square is a building site
The slippery slate pavement on Buchannan Street

Men think about sex every six seconds
A pretty but tired girl leans on a boy's back
He is unfolding a map and speaking German

Men think about sex every six seconds
Gordon Street has train passengers emptied all over it
Hope Street is made out of Nitrogen Dioxide

Men think about sex every six seconds
The girl that works in Nero's has warm eyes
I imagine the smell of her neck and smell my latte instead


Don't worry, man. It isn't deja vous.
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Post by izeveryboyin » February 9th, 2005, 4:23 pm

at the last line I felt wired mans. I saw neon lights, gypsie fights, palming his piece in the middle of bed to little Nero girl who gives him head he don't listen at what the doctor said... that's why old school rock is dead. Fantastic stuff man. This piece was fantastic stuff!

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Post by bennie » February 9th, 2005, 4:29 pm

thanks.

glad you liked it. I came home from Hope street tonight and blew my nose...car exhaust emissions...

Can I sue the council for the sore heads and bad taste in my mouth?

I wonder if Nero girl would say that too:
Nero girl who gives him head
thanks for reading me.
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Post by izeveryboyin » February 9th, 2005, 4:38 pm

believe me bennie.. twas the reader's pleasure. Screw the council and mail the cum to a test lab and surrogate a baby. don't ever use the word right or the FCC'll hunt ya down. keep going baby. Keep going or kill the bastards. *wink*
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