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Freedom

Post by hester_prynne » March 5th, 2010, 1:15 am

Sweet sweet grind.
Rhythm of enough.
More improvisation room,
and i'm in touch
with the trees again,
romancing bodies of water,
starlites in my eyes.
Freedom.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Post by SmileGRL » March 5th, 2010, 10:19 am

yeah baby
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Post by saw » March 6th, 2010, 1:12 pm

superb simplicity carries this along to a beautiful conclusion....I dig it !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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