suN is near

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suN is near

Post by SmileGRL » March 5th, 2010, 10:18 am

this bRoken lullaby. this suNless soul. tears fears. dreams hopes. aches & screams. i stitch them aLL together with sticky fingers writing hoMe. whaT do you caRe what kind of needle i stick into my veins when you’re knitting your oWn song?

i cringe
i cringe for you sometimes
i envy
i wish

i wish

i wish

& wHat to dO with hopes swimming in fear & dreams seWn inTo my eaRs

time. time. drink ginger & cinnamon tea. chamomile me. sew. sew. no more snow! no more broken. no more.

i wrote this poem

count the days…suN
sun is near

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Post by saw » March 6th, 2010, 1:03 pm

much anguish illustrated effectively in your lines, the cycle of wishing for more, what might be woven, sewn, the rotation of the earth, the sun's distance.....the cycles of life......the longing for brighter days...

nice work, smile
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by SmileGRL » March 8th, 2010, 11:21 am

exactly. thanks for reading deeper.

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Post by the mingo » March 8th, 2010, 1:21 pm

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Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by SmileGRL » March 8th, 2010, 3:16 pm

tick tock tick tock. the smiley was so big i almost missed the exclamation marks, mr. mingo. and yet, i did not.

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 8th, 2010, 4:22 pm

Painful yet hopeful ... I can identify!

The human condition ... we need each other

Great to see you posting, MJ! We've missed you around here!

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Post by SmileGRL » March 8th, 2010, 4:43 pm

thanks miss dori. i missed you guys too. so silly of me to stay away so long. thanks for having me back.

this winter has just been too miserable and too long. but i see suN! & things always look better when the sun is shining.

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