incestuous relations(greed)

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sonofthesun
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incestuous relations(greed)

Post by sonofthesun » March 17th, 2010, 12:00 am

are you the best the brightest
if you walk down the Street,
or just more of the same.
see where it led with kings and queens
did not we not learn from the dark ages.
limited relations breeds naught but disease
from within without.
you cannot build upon a limited base.
life Is change.
as without the earth shall abort
any closed system.
as although we are all our own island
we Are all one
symbiotic amalgamation.


life must be free flowing
sharing is not just for children
as they surely do die without it



tried to use punctuation, have trouble using it when its not in my mind, feel free to add and subtract as you wish, it seems to change my poem when i add it...too concrete
There is no empty space

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