phantom pain

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sonofthesun
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phantom pain

Post by sonofthesun » April 3rd, 2010, 2:07 am

a life i lived
and cant remember
people were apart
but no remembrance of them
given to me through exchange of fluids
a spiral woven
There is no empty space

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Post by stilltrucking » April 3rd, 2010, 7:51 am

Reminds me of Weismann's Theory the continuity of germplasm

I felt the continuity of all life flowing through my veins

All the pain and joy too

a helix entangled up in blue

I liked your poem a lot
please pardon my ramble

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Post by revolutionrabbit » April 3rd, 2010, 6:44 pm

I don't remember much
I remember too much
It seems they come in spurts
try to feel what hurts
try to forget what feels numb
this time around I came bum

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germplasm?

Post by sonofthesun » April 6th, 2010, 2:35 am

germplasm is immortal, evolution through mutation and will, still the same thing, just a tweak to an immortal structure, thanks for the names to place it still trucking, life is one dynamic fucking fucker
There is no empty space

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