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Post by saw » May 22nd, 2010, 9:31 am

what if the only internet
wasn't invented by al gore
what if the only worldwide web
was the forest fungi
transferring nutrients from a species
that has enough to spare
to a species that needs more
to survive

while creationist and evolutionists
vie for top billing, a man
sitting on his back porch
staring at shooting stars
having a long contemplative drag
on his favorite smoke
thinks to himself
this complexity of the universe

exceeds our ability
to understand it, this man knows
that mushrooms alone
produce the same classes
of neurotransmitters
that enable him to think
and it doesn't really matter
whose responsible

for all this
god, nature, still
our puny brains are inadequate
to the challenge of comprehension
so howz about, for harmony's sake
we just agree that god's most
brilliant design
was evolution
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Post by justwalt » May 23rd, 2010, 4:37 am

creative-evolution is something I've
come to believe over the past 20 years.
It makes more sense to combine the two.

walt

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Post by mnaz » May 23rd, 2010, 4:35 pm

. .mushrooms and windows to interconnectivity, or so I've heard. maybe it's not so much that our brains are puny, but malnourished in some ways. evolution, why not? and make it quick. things are happening fast . . .

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Post by saw » May 23rd, 2010, 6:21 pm

yea, why not walt.....and mnaz good points, everything does seem to accelerating with the population growth...hang on to your hat....
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Post by judih » May 23rd, 2010, 10:58 pm

if you sit in the same place long enough
the whole world whirls by

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Post by saw » May 24th, 2010, 6:18 am

yes judih, the cycles of living....perhaps that's the strategy of the cross legged monk that stares at the sun on the side of a mountain in Nepal....he's cut out the mumbo-jumbo.....gotten down to brass tacks,
why bother with the madness of men..........
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Post by judih » May 24th, 2010, 10:23 pm

(if only it wasn't so interesting!)

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Post by saw » May 25th, 2010, 6:08 am

agreed.....haha !
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Post by hester_prynne » May 26th, 2010, 9:43 pm

Hell yeah!
I heartily agree.
Really enjoyed this!
H 8)
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