Bird Shitku

[sooZen]

Big Mama and Rod Stewart
apex grackles in cypress condo
brood launch!!!

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Francisco (El Rey)
first born, first to fly
caught a bug

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Little Sis (hesitant)
follow the leader
grackle games

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Big Mama (wise as owl)
she laid down the law(s)
"catch yer own or die!"

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Mr. and Mrs. Wilson
(ringneck lovey doveys')
chasing egg stealin' black birds
sky the limit

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Scout (whitewing dove)
~sans pony express~
lookout!

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The Brothers' Grimm
dressed in black (grackle stylin')
brothers? gay? ~ no matter

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(too talky haiku!
but when it comes to haiku
...say it briefly or say it however it comes!)

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Clicks and Clacks
the racket brothers
grackle drum beaters

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empty feeder
hummin'bird in my face
pushy, pushy!!!

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okay, I'm done.
or am I?
who knows?

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[Doreen Peri]

i love these!

[sooZen]

Thanks Dor, they gave me a chuckle also when they flew out.

[Arcadia]

community sounds
busy shiitake salad
Soo laughs!

[sooZen]

Arcadia, may I say that you have gotten quite adept at hiaku?

I loved this one, the mushroom-ed reference, the laughs. Very good! Thank you for taking me along...

[Arcadia]

hiaku sounds proper: a sort of dislexic hiatus...! gracias for sharing!

[sooZen]

Si! It is very proper, in a way and the word is singular or plural, either/or. Dyslexic hiatus? Interesting observation mi amiga. Perhaps so.

[Artguy]

You are the Ku Queen....

Crow in the morning
Sunlight through the window
Black feather flight

[Artguy]

birds chirping wildly
dusk is drawing near
then silence

[judih]

dawn birds
heat wave in the air
songs fade away

[Hollweg]

Shiny black crow eyes
me with malice; then issues
a sharp diatribe.