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Arcadia
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Post by Arcadia » July 9th, 2010, 7:44 pm

unidos
en celebración meteorológica
el aire frío y claro de la noche
parece no tener dudas
sobre la explosión de superficies
mientras caminamos

the ninth

united
in meteorologic celebration
the cold and clear air of the night
seems not to have doubts
about the explosion of surfaces
while we walk
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Post by WIREMAN » July 9th, 2010, 10:29 pm

AWESOME!!!!!!...i could comprendre most of the espanol.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Post by constantine » July 10th, 2010, 9:54 pm

yes. this has an elemental power - the english translation is very satisfying.
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Post by judih » July 11th, 2010, 12:01 am

great dynamic, arcadia
i can feel that night
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Post by Arcadia » July 11th, 2010, 6:15 pm

hey, gracias for reading! :D very windy and slightly rainy at the moment, and happy about Spain being happy, you know... it´s in our linguistic ADN after all... :lol: :wink:
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Post by judih » July 11th, 2010, 10:19 pm

so, the World Cup Octopus was right.
he picked spain, i was told.

bravo
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