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Found Out

Post by .Lucy. » September 25th, 2010, 8:52 pm

Found Out

His eyes reveal decades of wisdom,
a gumbo of knowledge,
a paella of experience.

His throaty voice clear and sweet,
like his smile.
A sharpness of wit and humor,
he tells me he's defied death
at least 3 times in his 92.5 years.

He envelopes me in tales
of Old New York City,
of fur cutting and his stolen 18th century clock collection,
trips to Spain and Havana cigars,
of being on his death-bed and fighting to live at 50,
poetry written in countless countries,
of broken hearts and love finally found.

Now, sitting here in the middle of his first solo show.
He 92 and a half, and I 28-
I feel as though he and I, we are ageless
and timeless.

His art all around me,
reminiscent of industrial secrets of the 1950's,
minutiae of toys and fragments over the course of 60 years.
Wooden frames of stories waiting to be told.
Metallic remnants held together
by memories and tears.

His quick mind recalling events
that occured 3 times my age, with a keen
sense of where and how.

He says he's considering dyeing
his full white beard black
to look a few years younger
and his mustache twiches
with the promise of a heart-warming chuckle.

He tells me he knows I will find love
because he's lived long enough to know
love comes when you least expect it.
I told him I'm not looking for love,
nor am I waiting for it, after what I've been through.
He waved my words away,
not dismissively but sagely.
("A sweet young girl like you, with such beautiful bone structure,
such high cheek bones.
You'll find find the right one. If I were only 65 years younger...)
Fate and luck, they play a huge part in life, he says.

I promise to visit him at his Chelsea home.
He makes me promise him
to bring my poetry as he wishes to study my writing.
He hopes to exchange ideas
and create new thoughts.

I study him, taking in every astute inch
and know I am privledged to have met him.
A wealth of stories and anecdotes,
of lessons learned and soon to be learned-
he lives for his art
and his art lives because of him.

He gives love.
He is love.
This
is what keeps Abe alive.

LT
9/25/10
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Re: Found Out

Post by SadLuckDame » September 26th, 2010, 8:18 am

.Lucy., this was lovely!
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: Found Out

Post by judih » September 26th, 2010, 8:44 am

This is an amazing encounter, lucy.
wanna read your work after you meet him in Chelsea.

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Re: Found Out

Post by constantine » September 26th, 2010, 11:05 am

a top-shelf effort, lucy.

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Re: Found Out

Post by .Lucy. » September 26th, 2010, 11:22 am

Thank you! I'm very fortunate to have met Abe. I love his stories, what he has to share, he's an amazing character and I can't wait to visit him and see more of his wonderful art. I'll keep you guys posted :D
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Re: Found Out

Post by Arcadia » September 26th, 2010, 7:29 pm

so beautiful melting poem, Lucy! :D gracias for share it!!!!!!!

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Re: Found Out

Post by joel » September 27th, 2010, 12:54 pm

now, that's the way to write a bio! full of life, full of immotality, aware of death and of mortality and just not caring. dye the beard! if i ever live that long, i'm gonna grow a long bald-man ponytail and dye it brown with gray streaks. and hopefully i'll have jowls. and hopefully someone will care about me and visit my home (maybe not in Chelsea though). great stuff!
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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