"DO NOT -THE TOLIT," Said The Placard.

Post your poetry, any style.
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stilltrucking
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Re: "DO NOT -THE TOLIT," Said The Placard.

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2010, 12:05 pm

I stopped wearing fancy pants
so hard to get comfortable in them.the worst were the worsted wool, had suit like that, ughh the feel of those drops dripping down the prickly pants leg.

I liked your poem a lot
left me grinning
welcome to studio eight
looking forward to reading more of your work.

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joel
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Re: "DO NOT -THE TOLIT," Said The Placard.

Post by joel » September 29th, 2010, 1:17 pm

Dude, if that's the sign on the bathroom where I'm interviewing for a job, it might make me wonder about my desire for employment. But honestly, I like it--especially out loud. Good sounds. Thanks!
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: "DO NOT -THE TOLIT," Said The Placard.

Post by happytrails » October 24th, 2010, 8:44 pm

Neo, You are still the one who can make me smile even when my life is in the tolit.

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