I love haiku
it looks so easy
thanks
autumn haiku 34
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Re: autumn haiku 34
Me too
trying to learn
I know very little about them
except what I have picked up on from this board and the haiku board at litkicks.
Your haiku was a very satisfying haiku experience for me.
I don't know what else I can say.
Except I am looking forward to reading more of your haiku.
I have heard you have to know the rules before you can break them. Most of my haiku, if not all of them, are too intellectual.
trying to learn
I know very little about them
except what I have picked up on from this board and the haiku board at litkicks.
Your haiku was a very satisfying haiku experience for me.
I don't know what else I can say.
Except I am looking forward to reading more of your haiku.
I have heard you have to know the rules before you can break them. Most of my haiku, if not all of them, are too intellectual.
Re: autumn haiku 34
the fish are its dreams...neologistic wrote:a cooling stream sleeps
'neath blankets of sun and leaves;
the fish are its dreams
that's perfect.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: autumn haiku 34
I like this, neo. I can't pick one part of it that is my favourite, because it is all one smooth thought. Nice.
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