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joel
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Post by joel » October 1st, 2010, 12:30 pm

An ocean fish: allochton on the sand,
its slender gut but slightly domed above
the ocean-leveled plane like byzantine
ecclesiastic monuments in rings
around a still Aegean sea. I traced
its body with a finger, unconcerned
with details of its fins; its plastic eyes
and drying scales: ignored (when something dies,
it’s lucky to be noticed). And it burned—
the fish— until it stank. But I was graced
to find it when I found it. There’re things
that ordinary words obscure, that lean
on language unsupported, like a love
that I can trace but never understand.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: traced

Post by RonPrice » October 2nd, 2010, 1:54 am

I'm not sure that: "Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw.....but I liked your poem.-Ron
married for 46 years, a teacher for 35, a writer and editor for 14 and a Baha'i for 54(as of 2013)

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