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joel
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Post by joel » October 20th, 2010, 3:55 pm

But why would Love have troubled waters? No—
I want to answer no and trust that Love
has never caused the troubled loves that flow,
flash, flood in foolishnesses of
emotive happenstances, lust mistakes.
But Love has troubled waters. And we know
beyond a reasonable doubt the stakes
of judgment troubled loves will drive to throw
their carnival and tabernacle tents
to heights of ballyhoo (as loves will do).
If Love has troubled waters, it presents
perhaps the proof that Love is human too,
that trouble’s just the water we possess
to swallow down the pill that Love is. Yes.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by WIREMAN » October 20th, 2010, 4:57 pm

immensity of love...........
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by dadio » December 19th, 2010, 12:07 pm

Excellent poem, Joel.

If Love has troubled waters, it presents
perhaps the proof that Love is human too,
that trouble’s just the water we possess
to swallow down the pill that Love is. Yes.
( art here.)

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