Municipal camping

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Arcadia
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Municipal camping

Post by Arcadia » November 7th, 2010, 8:15 pm

quantum physics & medicine
how many bottles of beer and water do we need?
new massive drugs and capitalism junk
let´s translate with the shadows
twenty five or thirty years for the conscience jump?
yeah, there are more vegetables and meat there
Fenice, Lot and the salt thing, don´t you knew about it?
hey!, have you bring the guitar?
(metaconversation laughters…)
two mates and some brownies circling…

Camping Municipal

fisica cuántica y medicina
¿cuántas botellas de cerveza y de agua necesitamos?
nuevas drogas masivas y basura capitalista
transladémonos con la sombra
¿veinticincho o treinta años para el salto de conciencia?
sí, hay más vegetales y carne allá
Fenicia, Lot y el tema de la sal, ¿no lo sabías?
che!, ¿trajiste la guitarra?
(risas metaconversacionales...)
dos mates y algunos brownies haciendo círculo...

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by happytrails » November 7th, 2010, 8:54 pm

Just what kind of medicine have you been using and what all is in those brownies?

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by Arcadia » November 7th, 2010, 8:59 pm

:lol: just sort of parallell-like conversations during today´s asado by the river during a birthday in the first summer-like day of spring! :wink: gracias for reading, happytrails!

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by judih » November 8th, 2010, 12:21 am

ah, a mosaic of conversation over the asado
(& by brownies, do you mean the sort with wings? - ha @happy trails)

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by revolutionrabbit » November 8th, 2010, 12:31 am

let's translate with the shadows

yes lets

capitalism junk

the human race is camping out in the park

pass the brownie or the greenie

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by stilltrucking » November 8th, 2010, 3:48 am

In a campground
where women come and go
speaking of Michelangelo
and fresh vegetables
I
Dig your poem

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by Arcadia » November 8th, 2010, 8:36 pm

love when the too-much-city-life-we is triggered somehow in our still nomadic spots...! :lol: (and today the temperature dropped 25 centigrades in some hours...!) gracias for sharing!!!!! :D

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by jim turner » November 12th, 2010, 12:08 pm

Aloud, reads well in both tongues, but the content confuses an old man with a sheltered life. Are your personae just trying to get away from life in the city? Our only municipal campers are the homeless sleeping in city parks. jim

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by joel » November 18th, 2010, 2:43 pm

Arcadia wrote:capitalism junk

basura capitalista
Sí. Yes.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by Arcadia » November 18th, 2010, 11:14 pm

jim: Our only municipal campers are the homeless sleeping in city parks. well, we were not homeless, at least materially... :lol: gracias for reading, you too! :wink:

joel: yeah...!

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by Sue Littleton » November 19th, 2010, 10:18 am

Bravo, Arcadia, poeta amiga y vecina. Tu inglés es como mi español, de repente un pequeño error, "Did you bring your guitar?" "Have you brought your guitar?" Verbos, mi Waterloo!

Our homeless increase daily, take over the street corners with mattresses and a pet dog -- sad comment on a rich and beautiful country badly governed.

Cariños, Sue

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by Arcadia » November 19th, 2010, 1:46 pm

I have problems not only with verbs in English...! :lol:, feel free to re-translate each time you want, Sue, maybe I learn some grammar, by the way!!! :wink:

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Re: Municipal camping

Post by mnaz » November 21st, 2010, 2:01 am

to me, camping was supposed to be quiet
maybe it's just me. probably.

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