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Post by .Lucy. » November 23rd, 2010, 10:59 pm

Life is a broken maze
of hidden pathways.

We deviate,
detour,
get distracted.

The purpose is not to reach the end
but to experience
the beauty of the labyrinth
around us.

LT
11-23-10
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Re: Foliage

Post by judih » November 23rd, 2010, 11:34 pm

pathways of leaves
a moment of glory
soon past
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Post by SmileGRL » November 24th, 2010, 10:42 am

yes. the purpose is the journey. not the end. not the perfection. not the rules. the purpose is the experience. and the beauty of it all.

and even when we deviate, it is part of the beauty of the plan.

i like this lucy. thaNks for sharing.
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Re: Foliage

Post by joel » November 24th, 2010, 1:31 pm

When a maze is broken, then it's oft6en easiest to escape...to slip through its cracks...and all the more wonderful to walk, because it's done in freedom and appreciation of the wandering, not under the compulsion of being lost. Lovely.
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Re: Foliage

Post by jim turner » November 24th, 2010, 6:10 pm

For me a look at life from a different, intriguing point of view. And you dare awaken me at 85! jim
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Re: Foliage

Post by mnaz » November 24th, 2010, 11:19 pm

indeed..
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Re: Foliage

Post by hester_prynne » November 25th, 2010, 1:28 am

Indeed squared.
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