A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

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jim turner
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A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by jim turner » November 25th, 2010, 4:41 pm

Offended by his verse,
dark in darkness they came;
their thundering gun-butts and boot heels
unhinged the door to his dreams.

Painted flames blazed on the walls
of their scream-proof cell;
tortured fans groaned,
exhausting the stench of agony,
the reek of cigars they did not smoke.

Finely, they twisted pegs to tune his nerves,
then scratched out on those living strings
a shrieking music scored in hell.
For hour-long moments, for day-long hours,
his flesh and bones composed
a final masterpiece on pain--
in sounds that were not words.

Jim 2002

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mnaz
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Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by mnaz » November 25th, 2010, 5:44 pm

and it was all in the name of some "religious" (in quotes) eventual greater good, no doubt. fools.

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Sue Littleton
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Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by Sue Littleton » November 25th, 2010, 6:52 pm

It was politics ... he was a poet on the wrong side of the other side. A true poet of the Crystal Lute, Jim! Sue

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Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by Doreen Peri » November 26th, 2010, 12:08 am

You, Jim, are a wordsmith extraordinaire!

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Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by happytrails » November 26th, 2010, 12:47 pm

Excellent poem. Horrific topic. But it happens, doesn't it? People being punished for their thoughts?

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Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Post by hester_prynne » November 26th, 2010, 1:09 pm

"Finely, they twisted pegs to tune his nerves"

Gut wrenching deconstruction of soul.
Brutally good
H 8)
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