one tiny tendril
creeps slowly from the vine. soon
a giant pumpkin
haiku 5?
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hester_prynne
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Re: haiku 5?
Hah choo ah hai ku
Little sneezes in breezes
Hah choo ah hai ku
I'm not very good at these but I like them.
H
Little sneezes in breezes
Hah choo ah hai ku
I'm not very good at these but I like them.
H
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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happytrails
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Re: haiku 5?
That's cute. Bless you.
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jim turner
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Re: haiku 5?
Happy, that's a neat little bit of verse. It must take up residence among the best. And that Scarlet Letter gal's response is very good, too. I thought mine were good but these have got mine beat. jim
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happytrails
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Re: haiku 5?
Thanks Jim. Have you tried the zebra haiku challenge? I am waiting until I can forget the ones I read. They are all so good and they left me feeling at a loss.
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Doreen Peri
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Re: haiku 5?
hey happy trails... I love this haiku!
But did you know we have a special forum set aside just for haiku?
I didn't know if you knew.
But it's true!
Check it out and when you do
you can post on there, too, some of your haiku.
But did you know we have a special forum set aside just for haiku?
I didn't know if you knew.
But it's true!
Check it out and when you do
you can post on there, too, some of your haiku.
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