walkin away

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
creativesoul
Posts: 4660
Joined: September 15th, 2005, 3:23 am
Contact:

walkin away

Post by creativesoul » December 1st, 2010, 4:06 am

te best feelin
is takin your sacreds and returnin ome
te little Creator sends me to listen carefully lon conversations about sex and broken earts
and tey never do wat we want
because it is just kind of like tat
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

User avatar
stilltrucking
Posts: 20646
Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas

Re: walkin away

Post by stilltrucking » December 1st, 2010, 8:30 am

Interesting.
I heard it said that if it don't kill me it will make you stronger but I heard it said that if it don't kill you it will break your heart.

fortunately geezers thrive on broken hearts.

keep on writing amiga

thanks

jim turner
Posts: 215
Joined: November 10th, 2010, 12:12 pm

Re: walkin away

Post by jim turner » December 1st, 2010, 2:11 pm

I like puzzles and had fun trying to solve this one. Finally got used to the spelling and thinking that sacreds also means secrets and that last line just put everything into place. If I didn't shoot straight, tell me. jim

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests