underneath any mystery

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underneath any mystery

Post by e_dog » February 18th, 2005, 6:27 am

he tore out his own eyes
and now
he cannot find his keys

it was much to our surprise
when you
left the world without devise

underneath that misery
lies truth
without attempts at mystery

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Post by judih » February 18th, 2005, 6:55 am

lost and found
several pairs of eyes
rolling, viewing, unbelieved

blind drifters
deny possession
world looks better, blank

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Post by e_dog » February 18th, 2005, 7:12 am

the world looks better

when it has to



and doesn't

when it really has to

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Post by mousey1 » February 18th, 2005, 9:45 pm

Why do I like this?

I have my reasons.

But I do, do like this. Rings true.

Are you profound or is it some sort of a trick.

Where are my keys.....

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