Just Before Waking Up, Alone

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e_dog
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Just Before Waking Up, Alone

Post by e_dog » February 2nd, 2005, 11:57 pm

i dream of you
always passing through
a room
a store
a garden
you stop to say a few words
and smile
i try to hold you
in my arms
and confess all my sins
i plead with you
to stay
but it's no use
you slip away
as gently
as you came
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Post by Doreen Peri » February 3rd, 2005, 12:58 am

lyrics......

it's a song.....

beautiful!......
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ADannon
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Post by ADannon » February 18th, 2005, 7:47 am

Very tender write~
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Post by mousey1 » February 18th, 2005, 9:48 pm

A soft sigh.
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