Dancing vehemence eyes
Slightest touch sparks
a sizzling fury, of prickly
bumps up my spine
An intense flame when
You say my name
Light-headed, sweltering
Grateful for your embrace
Cannot hold my place
Just before you kiss me
Do it again, please
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weepingwillow
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Re: Do it again, please
A good doing and feeling poem. Like it very much. 
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Lao C Ryter
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Re: Do it again, please
A graveside kiss
that missed your lips,
but landed all the same.
that missed your lips,
but landed all the same.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
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happytrails
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- Location: ontario, canada
Re: Do it again, please
WW, I like your style. What an intense poem.
LCR, lovely tender response. We have a family member to whom we blow graveside kisses. Nice to think they are received.
LCR, lovely tender response. We have a family member to whom we blow graveside kisses. Nice to think they are received.
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